Ben Saufley
This was … not good. A good 60% of the book had no plot movement, no tension except for a mild will they/won't they. The writing was extremely corny. I enjoyed Jeneva Rose's "Perfect" books for what they were, but this – written, I think, before those? – was not even that. I'm not entirely sure why I don't rate this lower, but I suppose a few points for the mildly interesting "twist" that came about five minutes after anything resembling plot started taking place and ten before the end of the book. But even then, from the beginning, it did seem pretty likely that they were actually both the bad guy – if there was even going to be a bad guy, which was not clear for most of the book. Both, or neither! But yep, both.
This was … not good. A good 60% of the book had no plot movement, no tension except for a mild will they/won't they. The writing was extremely corny. I enjoyed Jeneva Rose's "Perfect" books for what they were, but this – written, I think, before those? – was not even that. I'm not entirely sure why I don't rate this lower, but I suppose a few points for the mildly interesting "twist" that came about five minutes after anything resembling plot started taking place and ten before the end of the book. But even then, from the beginning, it did seem pretty likely that they were actually both the bad guy – if there was even going to be a bad guy, which was not clear for most of the book. Both, or neither! But yep, both.