This is definitely my least favorite Vorkosigan saga book (so far) by a good amount. While some aspects of Shards of Honor and The Warrior’s Apprentice, the other two books also published in 1986 in the series, are a bit clunky and clearly representing an inexperienced Bujold, Ethan of Athos *really* shows that.

The first 60% of the book focuses mainly on Ethan’s character and why he’s being involved in a complex political situation when he’s from a planet that’s likely viewed as very “backwater”- why would anyone care about someone from Athos? Athos is a planet founded by very religious men who wanted a planet free of women- yes, I know, it sounds bad. I was extremely skeptical about this setup. And there are a lot of homophobic “jokes” and moments. Most of them make logical sense why it would happen. Still kinda sucks to read at times. One particular homophobic insult, though, doesn’t make any sense to me even within the context of the world of the book, and that bothered me for a WHILE. But by the *end* of the book, I understood a lot more about why Bujold set it up this way. I needed more of this worldbuilding and Ethan’s views in the beginning. It would’ve made things a lot clearer to begin with.

The problem is, the first and second halves of the books feel very different. The first half follows this trail of breadcrumbs for a mystery, plodding along, then boom something happens and it’s pedal to the metal for the rest of the book. That second half is really well plotted! The answers to the mysteries are interesting, the resolution of the conflict is fun in that Bujold style, and I really liked it.

It really needed more connective tissue between it and the first half, though. Especially when the second half asks all of these great questions about free will and what makes a human a human. I needed more of this philosophy to connect with the first half of the book. It’s not that it’s bad per se. It just feels like there’s a disconnect somewhere.

The book is too short- if there were a few more chapters there that really bridged the two halves, it would’ve helped it a *lot*. I liked the characters- let them *breathe* Bujold! Let the story unfold more slowly if it needs it. Anyway, I do think this is perhaps a symptom of Ethan of Athos being one of her earliest books and even though I had some problems with it, it’s still an enjoyable read (for the most part. Seriously, the homophobia could’ve been toned down). Of course I’ll continue to read Vorkosigan. This one was just a bit of a miss.

I’m mixed on this one. On one hand, I loved how the book explored themes of family, grief, gender, accepting yourself, and overcoming trauma. The sections of the book that focused the most on these themes were written beautifully and impactfully. This book explained and explored gender dysphoria in an way that I, as a cis-het person, could put myself in Nhung’s place and understand it to a degree that hasn’t happened with other books that explore this topic.

The sections between these beautiful moments, though… I mostly found them clunky. Not bad, but it felt very much like moving from set piece to set piece. The characters were so well done, I wish the plot had been a bit more engaging. The first few chapters I struggled with- I wasn’t liking the book and felt confused. But once I got to the second third of the book, the more introspective aspects started to ramp up and the story felt more connected to those themes. Loved the characters and themes, felt mixed on the overall plot.

Rating: 2.5/5

Overall, I’m disappointed I didn’t like this more. It’s got good ideas that were dragged down by problems in the worldbuilding and writing.

Pros:

  • Unique dragons and dragon academy set up
  • Physical science based magic
  • Mostly realistic portrayal of how indigenous peoples are treated by colonizers for land and resources (honestly, a bit too optimistic but it would be depressing if it was fully realistic)
  • LGBTQ+ rep, disability rep, neurodivergence rep
  • Enjoyable character dynamics
  • Very slice of life
  • Calling out the absolute colonial and societal BS with the main character’s willingness to speak for herself
  • The chapter titles make a story too, which I liked

Cons:

  • *Very* slice of life- don’t expect much of a plot beyond “Indigenous girl goes to dragon school and encounters obstacles”
  • Headache inducing terminology because of the mixed Viking, Germanic, and English fictional culture. The world is essentially an alternate history + dragons version of Earth. Yes, some of the words we use for certain concepts in math and science would be different. However, the world is SO heavily based on the real world (it even uses the Julian calendar), that I cannot fathom why the author felt it was necessary to change the names of geometry (anglereckoning), alchemy/chemistry (skiltakraft), hypothesis/experiment (vermutun/versuch), and elements like carbon (kolfni), hydrogen (vetna), etc. Perhaps this was to make you feel lost like Anequs, but all it did for me was make it so I had to mentally translate everything as I was reading and it was more annoying than anything. You use the word coal, why not carbon? It’s like driving down a familiar road, but all of the sudden the road is full of potholes.
  • Repetition. There were two times that I noticed a large passage that was repeated verbatim. And a lot of the book is repetitive, even if not verbatim.
  • Random Norse mythology asides? It’s already long, I’m not sure why these are here.

The Warrior’s Apprentice Author: Lois McMaster Bujold Rating: 4/5

First, I have to mention how absolutely crazy it is that this book, published 2nd, has references that work perfectly for both the 1st and *7th* published books (which are direct sequels)?? They’re really specific, too. Bujold, how??? I’d definitely recommend reading Shards of Honor and Barrayar first. You can start here, but there’s one character who is so much richer because of what happens in those books and it’s better for it.

Second, it’s really amazing to see a disabled main character in an 80s sci fi that doesn’t involve somehow magically curing his disability or making it moot through technology. Representation of disability is STILL rare, and I felt it was well done here. Seeing a character deal with the stigma and prejudice through deflecting with humor, sometimes anger, and often by showing he is capable was really good. I liked the portrayal of a teenager trying to desperately prove he was good enough for a heavily militaristic, ableist society, and how that leads into a massive snowball effect of consequences. Is it absolutely ludicrous how far it goes? Yep. But you see every step along the way through this gifted young maniac with… let’s say excessive initiative.

What I didn’t love about this book was the amount of “well isn’t that convenient” or highly improbable events that happened. There are three main examples of this, and that did detract from my reading experience. Imagine a character creates a problem one chapter, then the very next chapter they find a way too convenient way to help with the problem (not solve it, necessarily- in fact I’d argue that convenient solution made things worse…) but I digress. This happened a bit too much for my taste.

However, despite that downside, I continue to love Bujold’s writing and characters. Bujold comes up with the most *incredible* sentences and passages at times. They’re very quotable, whether profound or comedic. The plot may have been a bit convenient at times, but the character arcs were really, really good and the emotional scenes were very impactful.

TW list at the bottom of the review!

Little Heaven is, as you can guess from the title and genre, a religious horror book. It has a classic setup of a religious commune in the middle of the woods where mysterious and dark things begin to happen. Unfortunately for it, I’ve seen this premise but better before. I’m overall extremely mixed on this one.

Let’s start with some of the negatives. This book is WAY too long. It’s almost 500 pages and it really didn’t need to be. There are two plotlines, one in the past and one in the present. The one in the present… I’m not sure entirely what the point was. I *can* see a thematic purpose, but I’m not sure it was needed. The past plotline contains the meat of the story, but even it has some random side tangents that barely lead anywhere and the payoffs later weren’t worth it. There are some horror elements that are also done a few too many times and explained in similar ways, so it felt repetitive and even started feeling silly in some places. This also happened with some of the more philosophic passages.

I can’t get over the book taking the time to explain the joke “Why was 6 afraid of 7? 789!” Why was that even relevant? I’ve finished the book and can’t tell you, honestly. And why did it need to be explained when that’s a joke that second graders tell each other? Baffling. And don’t get me started on a character calling a bunch of “small brown birds” KITES. My bird nerd brain went ballistic.

Now, onto the positives. Nick Cutter is very talented at writing body horror. It gets visceral reactions from me, which is hard to do- many horror authors don’t get that reaction. Some of the horror scenes were fantastic in their portrayal. It’s unfortunate they were so spread out or repetitive. There are also some good passages reflecting on the root of evil, what it means to be evil, etc. I thought the characters of Minerva, Ebenezer, and Micah were quite compelling. Each of them had their own struggles with morality and interesting ideas on what is and is not moral. The book really fleshed them out. Speaking of flesh, Amos Flesher, the leader of the commune, was also a fascinating figure in all of this, though unfortunately I think religious horror media often has this exact type of character. For the plot, while I thought it was much too long and similar to those I’ve seen before, there are some moments that genuinely surprised me. The reveal at the end is quite different, and it doesn’t give you the answers you may want.

However, I’d have to say to give this one a pass. If you really like religious horror with philosophical musings and don’t mind the book dragging in some areas, it does have good moments. Unfortunately, it’s dragged down by its length, the premise being so similar to so many others, and how repetitive it could feel.

TWs: Animal body horror, human body horror, suicide attempts, traumatic child death, child abuse, abuse of disabled children, religious abuse, homophobia (slurs), racism (slurs), misogyny (one character POV in particular), SA, extreme torture, mention of animal cruelty, mass murder

This book was such a step up from Shards of Honor for me, and I really enjoyed that one! The Vorkosigan series was published in a frankly bizarre order- despite this one being listed as #7, it’s a direct sequel to #1- like, DIRECT sequel. I’d definitely recommend reading those back to back.

Barrayar really exemplified Bujold’s talent for great characters and great worldbuilding. You can tell that each element of the politics and culture were thought through, and the characters are so memorable and real. I loved the outsider perspective on a culture that is misogynistic and ableist and this character not understanding it at all. It really shines a light on the issues in our own culture and society. Bujold also has an insane talent to switch emotions rapidly- one moment, I’m tearing up at a sad or tender moment, the next I’m laughing my ass off, and right after that it gets extremely tense. I don’t know how she manages it, but she does. Definitely continuing the series, I’m really enjoying this take on the classic space opera.

A few goblins accidentally get behind the enemy (human and elf) lines. Elf James Herriot lives in the forest. They meet and magic insanity ensues.

It’s cute and funny, not much else to it. Great for a palate cleanser or to break a reading slump!