Spectacular. Not all sci-fi/fantasy novelists can also crush a short story, but Jim Butcher knows how to write a Brief Case. There were a couple in here that didn’t work for me, but for the most part it was banger after banger after banger!

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  • Prose: 2.75/5
  • Theme: 5/5
  • Magic System: 4/5
  • World: 4/5
  • Characters: 3/5
  • Plot: 3.5/5
  • Overall: 3.75/5

Prose: 3/5

Good not great. There were a few nice turns of phrase, but overall if you're looking for prose on the level of Robin Hobb, or even Christopher Ruocchio, you're not going to find it here.

Theme: 5/5

To be honest, I’m a sucker for anti-colonialism and anti-capitalism themes. And I thought it was all executed quite well here. Woven into the plot, magic system, characters, and world without feeling too heavy-handed or preachy.

Magic System: 4/5

I loved the Will/Imbuing magic system and how it supported the anti-colonial themes. So much so that I almost didn't have a separate Magic System rating here! Impressive stuff. 4/5 only because it seemed to have the illusion of depth more than actual depth. The concept was strong, but in execution the system was softer than I was led to believe. I get the impression that might change as the series progresses, though!

World: 4/5

It took me until at least 50% through, but the world ended up wowing me. Again, everything, including the world, wove together spectacularly to support the themes of the book. The Hierarchy was grand but bland, obviously crushing most facets of cultures it dominated but adopting anything it thought worthwhile. <spoiler>Suus was beautiful, especially through Vis's eyes, and who knows wtf is happening with these alternate dimensions or whatever??</spoiler>

Characters: 3/5

Vis as a main character needed more early work, in my opinion. It wasn’t until the last half of the book, <spoiler>when he was in Suus</spoiler>, that I finally really cared about his arc.

It would be a bit cliche for the genre, but I think this book would have benefited from some flashbacks or something. Even just during part one. To instill that emotional connection before he is thrown into these situations that challenge his relationship with his past.

With the exception of <spoiler>Vis’s paramour</spoiler>, I did enjoy the side characters. <spoiler>Callidus and Eidhin were great, the other Thirds were great (except for the one previously mentioned).</spoiler> The romance didn’t feel justified to me.

Plot: 3.75/5

I thought the outline of the book could have been better. I didn’t really care for part one, but I enjoyed all of his time at <spoiler>the Academy</spoiler>. And the climax was killer!

I thought the book didn’t quite hit the right balance of questions answered to new questions asked, by the end. Wrapping up the first book in a fantasy series, especially one as grand in scope as this one, I think requires a delicate balance of wrapping mysteries up, leaving some hanging, and introducing new ones. And, for me at least, I wish there were more of the first.

Overall: 3.75/5

It took me a lot longer than I’d like, for a book this long, but I did come around and had a great time with the last ~30% of the book. Once the climax started I had no choice but to sprint through to the end!

This book is fantasy kung fu CRACK

Overall - 7.5/10
Plot - 6/10
Characters - 7/10
Concepts - 8/10
Prose - 6/10
Theme - 8/10
Narration - 8/10
Enjoyment - 8/10

Overall - 7/10
Plot - 7/10
Characters - 6/10
World & Concepts - 8/10
Prose - 6/10
Theme - 6/10
Narration - 7/10
Enjoyment - 7/10

Overall 8/10
Plot 8/10
Characters 8/10
World & Concepts 10/10
Prose 6/10
Theme 8/10
Narration 6/10
Enjoyment 9/10

Overall - 8/10
Plot - 6/10 Characters - 8/10 World & Concepts - 9/10 Prose - 8/10 Theme - 8/10 Enjoyment - 8/10

Overall - 8.5/10
Plot - 8/10 Characters - 9/10 Prose - 9/10 Theme - 10/10 Narration - 8/10 Enjoyment - 8/10

Overall - 8/10

  • Plot - 7/10
  • Characters - 7/10
  • World & Concepts - 8/10
  • Prose - 6/10
  • Theme - 7/10
  • Narration - 10/10
  • Enjoyment - 9/10

Overall - 6/10
Plot - 5/10 Characters - 6/10 World & Concepts - 8/10 Prose - 5/10 Theme - 6/10 Enjoyment - 7/10

Overall - 7.5/10
Plot - 7/10 Characters - 8/10 World & Concepts - 10/10 Prose - 7/10 Theme - 6/10 Narration - 8/10 Enjoyment - 7/10

Rating - 8/10
Plot - 8/10 Characters - 8/10 World & Concepts - 6/10 Prose - 5/10 Theme - 8/10 Narration - 10/10 Enjoyment - 9/10

Rating - 6.5/10
Plot - 6/10 Characters - 6/10 World - 8/10 Prose - 5/10 Theme - 4/10 Narration - 8/10 Enjoyment - 7/10

Overall Rating - 8/10
Plot - 7/10 Characters - 8/10 Concepts - 9/10 Prose - 6/10 Theme - 8/10 Narration - 8/10 Enjoyment - 9/10

Overall Rating - 7.5/10

Plot - 8/10
World 9/10
Characters - 7/10
Prose - 4/10
Theme - 8/10
Enjoyment - 8/10

Rating - 7.5/10
Plot - 7/10 Characters - 9/10 World - 6/10 Prose - 7/10 Theme - 8/10 Narration - 8/10 Enjoyment - 7/10

It is unbelievable that this is a debut novel. I am blown away by this book, and I cannot recommend it enough.

Finishing this series is so surreal for me. My parents bought me the trilogy in 2007, but I never got around to it. I let my Opa borrow the books and he never returned them, haha. Finally finishing the series is such a cathartic experience. I highly recommend these books!

WHAT. WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT. SO COOL.

Lovecraft has some cool ideas, and even some pretty good prose, but I think he really falls flat in putting that together into a story.