An interesting premise that disappoints at every turn. I tried to finish it, but the more I consider what I've read, I respect my time too much to attempt more. DNF @ 70%
• One-dimensional, unlikable characters
• Predictable “twists”
• Hamfisted handling of the “chosen one” trope
• A MC that doesn't seem to understand actions have consequences
• Lots of nosebleeds (I nearly had one trying to finish this dull mess)
• False marketing – the gothic vibes are there if you squint hard but be careful not to strain too much or you'll give yourself a nosebleed
• Meandering, cyclical plot
• Borrows elements from The Magicians, Inception, Remedy's Control, and X-Men but somehow still manages to underwhelm
Overwritten with bizarre character interactions and unbelievable dialogue.
Also, I understand setting a scene but the author spent so much time talking about how ostentatiously fancy the house is that I waffled between outrage (a la Eat the Rich) and falling asleep. Maybe it gets better, but my TBR is too long to entertain this nonsense. DNF at 20%.
An Agatha Christie/Sherlock Holmes-style mystery with all the expected set dressings: a group of guests, a dark, stormy night, murder most foul, and the paranormal with enough of the unexpected to keep it fresh.
I absolutely loved the tone of this and the world in which it is set is intriguing. Knocking off a star for a few minor logistical issues with some things that occur (I won't list them here because once you see them, you can't unsee them) but don't let it stop you from checking this out!
This story marched confidently and unabashedly into absolute mess territory.
The tone of the initial chapters is done well, but this changes drastically as the book progresses as if the author just decided they could frontload all their effort and wing the rest. I have whiplash from the inconsistent and sloppy writing which featured characters fluctuating in personality between 16 and 40.
What little world-building is present is applied with no rhyme or reason, such as how the passage of time differs between the two realms, but suddenly doesn't matter so X plot point can happen. Lots of telling, not showing with various events. I don't even have the energy to get into all the forced plot points.
The love interest had the appeal of wearing 40-grit sandpaper socks and (shockingly) there was no real connection between him and the protagonist. Additionally, without giving away spoilers, the whole situation was a little ick.
Lots of side characters, but don't worry, they are all the La Croix version of one of two archetypes: annoyingly chipper/friendly or vaguely mysterious and not to be trusted.
I kept reading because I expected, at 560 pages, this would form a cohesive story but the characters are dumb, the writing gets worse and it just...ends. It's not even a cliffhanger - more like the literary equivalent of syncope.
I'm a miser when it comes to 5-star ratings but this one earned it. Funny with witty banter and shenanigans and clearly defined, likable characters. The middle of the book dipped a little but was well-plotted overall, keeping me on my toes. A very satisfying read.
I haven't read any of Jodi Taylor's other works but of course, I am looking forward to checking them out now - I hope I didn't spoil anything major by reading this one first.
✔️ Dreamlike, dark academia (seriously 10000/10 for the vibes)
✔️ Well-written characters
✔️ Trauma handled well
✔️ The house is a character
❌ Multiple grammatical errors and typos, occasional weird sentence structure
❌ Potentially engaging worldbuilding flawed by frequent loredumps
❌ Pacing issues in the second half of the book with a rushed ending; the main conflict felt inadequate