Nani
I don't know if I read something different to everyone else but this was so disappointing. The plot was just so unnecessarily confusing when everything culminated at the end. Too many lies, too many plot points to try and keep the story interesting, and it was just a mess.
What makes it worst is the introduction of the MCs was actually pretty good. Lachlan was a mysterious MMC, and Mack seemed like a strong, kick ass FMC with a very specific purpose to getting herself involved in this whole mafia world, until she crosses paths with Lachlan and it all just goes out the window. Like why?
In the end, the whole reveal of the traitors and such was just underwhelming. I will give the rest of this series a shot, as I've heard the second book is better and I'm on a dark romance kick right now, but I will definitely lower my standards for this series as this book was definitely not it.
I don't know if I read something different to everyone else but this was so disappointing. The plot was just so unnecessarily confusing when everything culminated at the end. Too many lies, too many plot points to try and keep the story interesting, and it was just a mess.
What makes it worst is the introduction of the MCs was actually pretty good. Lachlan was a mysterious MMC, and Mack seemed like a strong, kick ass FMC with a very specific purpose to getting herself involved in this whole mafia world, until she crosses paths with Lachlan and it all just goes out the window. Like why?
In the end, the whole reveal of the traitors and such was just underwhelming. I will give the rest of this series a shot, as I've heard the second book is better and I'm on a dark romance kick right now, but I will definitely lower my standards for this series as this book was definitely not it.