Cayla
The character development and interpersonal relationships were just as beautiful as the first book, if not even more so, but the prose felt very rambly and at times almost unedited. A few of the same points were made repeatedly throughout the book in almost the same way, and nearly every paragraph felt like it was at least a sentence or two longer than it needed to be. If it had been edited down to be the closer to the same length as the first book, I think it could have been a solid five stars.
Still a beautiful read though. I am glad it exists.
The character development and interpersonal relationships were just as beautiful as the first book, if not even more so, but the prose felt very rambly and at times almost unedited. A few of the same points were made repeatedly throughout the book in almost the same way, and nearly every paragraph felt like it was at least a sentence or two longer than it needed to be. If it had been edited down to be the closer to the same length as the first book, I think it could have been a solid five stars.
Still a beautiful read though. I am glad it exists.