2043...(A Merman I Should Turn to Be)

There are concepts here that I like, but I don't think I'm the target audience or have can really understand what the author is getting at here without some translation. I like the underwater world the author builds. I also like the way the author illustrates the way bias creates hate in people who really don't understand what they hate or why. I would like this to be bit longer and full in more of the story that seemed disconnected so I understood some of the plot points better.