3:33

I enjoyed everything about this story, I can't think of a single thing I would “fix”.

The main character was relatable and engaging, his relationship with his teenage children seemed almost too real. His kids are at that soul crushing age where everything their parent does is the epitome of cringe and they want nothing to do with them but also not really, and as a parent you just wonder how to connect with them. His life is a bore, when he gets a glimpse of temporary escape and of a potential new lease on life, he can't help but to go for it and we can understand him, escape comes at a cost though... The story is skillfully written and it makes for a quick and hard to put down read, trust me, go in as blind as possible, you'll thank me later.

For personal reasons I will not accept any criticism of this novella. Thank you.