An Apache Princess

It was a good story. However, the writing was choppy and confusing in places; the characters were good, but the mechanics of the plot underdeveloped. It held my interest very well, and yet the details had a way of getting scrambled, so I had to backtrack numerous times to decipher what happened in what order. There was an interesting mystery, but I got the feeling that the author was much more used to writing about the ways of the frontier than of spinning out a properly paced mystery, which led to the confusion.