Another Terrible Thing

Read at: https://getinkspired.com/en/story/1246/another-terrible-thing/

I think that the snippets such as ‘40_Stories_Final.indd 28 6/18/12 5:38 PM Another Terrible Thing 29' (that occur four times) are perhaps errors. Either way it broke the cogency.

I feel like this had potential, it had pathos and emotionality, characters that were well crafted in a short amount of time, and held my interest. I just kept waiting for it to go somewhere. It's very possible that I completely missed something; a twist, a point, an ending. It just feels like a scrap of a story.