Breach of Peace

As a debut novella this is a good start to a larger world that did intrigue me to want to learn more about it. You can tell it's a debut and a self-published one (take that how you will). Greene's prose does feel like it lacks some of the maturity you find in a more established author - at times feeling a bit more like a script, describing how an actor should move in a scene - but I expect this will develop as he hones his writing over time. I caught one typo in the text overall but I'm more than happy to allow for that in self-published work. Overall I liked it and look forward to seeing the story evolve as Daniel evolves as a writer.