From Cold World, with Love

This was cute enough. It wasn't terribly exciting. Nice to have some bi male representation, but the chemistry between Lauren and Asa wasn't there for me. If she can't tell if he's making fun of her, best believe I also cannot tell. Maybe it would have been better if it was just a single POV? Ion know. It also would have helped if Daniel was a viable option for even a second. He was so obviously a twat that it wasn't believable to me that Lauren would be nervous around him regardless of his undescribed, but definitely there, hotness. It just missed for me.