Kalki: Adhyay 1

I would like say congratulations on being self published, that takes strength and courage.

Honest review: In regards to this book/novella it seems to juvenile for my taste.

I have been reading the preview of it to see if it is worth the buy, to finish reading it. In my opinion, for me, I will not continue reading it due to how juvenile it sounds and a few other reasons but I will not nitpick a self published book that took the time to write and had the guts to publish it.

Example of what I am taking about:
“The were one for all and all for one , type bros.”
“This royal family was one of the happiest family in this universe. And they have all the technologies of great qualities. As the ages passed the two bros were read to take the control over their fathers throne......“
“........he believed that he had much more knowledge of keeping their societies more happier.”
“Yes the Jupiter is the largest planet and because of it beauty and abundance of technologies and good facilites and more people started to settle on.....” Facilities was spelt wrong but like I said I will not nitpick all the small details because that is not fair.

There are very small spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes that can be overlooked, but as I continued to read the more childlike it seemed. I DO believe that the audience for this middle schoolers and not adults, unless this is your type of book.

Another reason why I will not be continuing to read this book is because I honestly do not like this type of genre, the whole Greek, Fantasy, sci-fi feel of it is not my prefeed read. I do tend to read Fantasy or dystopian, because Greek, Fantasy and Sci-Fi pretty much all in one is not my cup of tea. I was never able to get into that type of genre because it seems over rated and over done (just my opinion)

I will give you 4 stars for being self-published and having the guts to do what many are to afraid to do. I give you 4 stars because there are people out there that will love your writing and books. I am just not one of those people. Take my review with a grain of salt my friend, It is just an opinion, I am sure others will love your works of art. Please keep writing and keep pushing. I do recommend that you should broadcast this towards the younger audience.

Keep up the work, keep trying and keep going.