Knit One Murder Two

The story was cute, I'll give it that. But, it was in desperate need of a good editor. Is the main character reading from her diary, or...? Cutting into the flow of the conversation to explain how you offered the last cookie to your friend and when refused you say “more for me!” seemed unnecessary. The names of the stores in this small Ontario town were cute. Btw, Nipissing has one “p”, not two.