Pushing the limits

Pushing the limits

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Not my cup of tea. It was a rather...stale read. I couldn't connect with either of the main characters. Echo was a doormat for almost the entire book, Noah was just dull, I was tempted to skip his POV completely.

What irked me the most was that they were supposed to be these extraordinarily bright kids with a ton of potential (we're told that Echo was a great artist and had great academic results and that Noah was also very intelligent despite doing not so good in school), yet there's nothing to back that up. You can't see it in their interests, nor in their choice of friends, nor in the conversations they have with each other. Their vocabularies are much too rudimentary for kids with above average intelligence and a fairly decent education. But this probably stems from the author's own limitations. I wouldn't have brought this up if she hadn't insisted on portraying them as exceptional when they had mediocrity spelled all over them, academically and emotionally speaking.

Echo's amnesia was so far fetched. And when her father argued with her social worker that she shouldn't push her to remember because the last time she tried to do it she almost “broke her mind.” I LOLed so hard on this one. So that's what doctors use as a technical term these days, “to break one's mind”?

She also had craptastic friends and don't even get me started on her choice of boyfriends. How could a girl that “smart” fall for a guy like Luke? All he ever said to her was something “Oh, babe, you look so hot. You know I love you, babe. Let's have sex. Hahahahah. (Picturing Beavis)” What could he possibly have to offer other than being nice to stare at, because apparently he was “so hot”? Then we take Luke, we add a tragic past, some scars, a bad boy attitude, we tone down the douchebagerry and voila, we have Noah, lover boy number two. Very classy.

Their love was so nauseating. He kept calling her baby this, baby that, “you look so appetizing” etc. Yuck! I couldn't even feel any chemistry between them, let alone love.

The only thing I liked in the entire book was that Noah decided to go against his selfish feelings and not take his brothers away their foster parents, which was actually in their best interest.

Some “lovely” quotes:

I gazed into her beautiful green eyes and her fear melted. A shy smile tugged at her lips and at my heart. Fuck me and the rest of the world, I was in love.I'd fill her up and make her realize she'd always be empty without me.Say the word, baby, and I'll rock your world.Look at me, baby. I know you love me. Three nights ago you were willing to offer everything to me.No apologies. I could kiss you right now.Judging by the look in his chocolate-brown eyes, he meant it.Don't. I think I'm gonna puke. I loved the way his lips turned up–part mischievous smile, part man of mystery....I added a fucked up thought to another fucked up thought and I created a pile of shit.Baby, you've got enough strength and tenacity to takedown drug dealers. You'll be fine.I waited for my pulse to stop beating my veins like a gang initiation, for the blood to leave my face and for my lungs to not burn as I gasped.My siren had sung to me for way too long, capturing my heart, tempting me with her body, driving me slowly insane. Now, I expected her to pay up.

Waves of nausea

April 19, 2014Report this review