Scotopia First Dusk

While there were some errors such as some missing words or wrong words and a mix of present and past tense in the same sentence, this was an enjoyable story. It had me tense with its suspense and a bit teary-eyed the odd time or two. The world created within the story kept my attention until I had it completed. For me, despite the errors, it was a good read (pun not intended lol).