The Bodyguard

I don't have a lot to say about this. It was fine, and I enjoyed the first half a lot, then it seemed to drag, and had a lot of Things to Say About Life, and also the kissing didn't start until like three chapters from the end.

But my real problem?
The author doesn't know how paragraph breaks work.
Like, most sentences were on a new line even when it was continuing the thought from the previous one.
So. Many. Poor. Broken. Paragraphs.
It was constant!
It was distracting!!

See what I did there? eyebrow waggle – 2.5 stars