The Night Ends with Fire

I’m having a hard time rating The Night Ends with Fire. It wasn’t quite a 3-star or a 4-star read for me—it’s somewhere in between. There were parts I genuinely liked, but I found myself getting bored in the middle and kept checking how much I had left. Then, just as I was ready to give up, I got reabsorbed, and suddenly, it was over.

As a historical romantasy retelling of Mulan, it has some nice elements—the setting, the blend of romance and fantasy, and the familiar yet fresh storyline. But the violence and misogynistic society felt predictable and didn’t offer much in terms of surprise. In fact, the most surprising aspect was how absolutely idiotic the main character could be at times, making decisions that had me shaking my head.

The pacing probably would have benefited from splitting this into two books, allowing more room for the story to breathe, or by adding some spicy scenes to break up the slow middle sections. Despite its flaws, though, I’m still intrigued. The world is interesting enough to keep me curious, and I’ll likely continue with the rest of the series, hoping for more depth and better pacing ahead.