White Sand Omnibus

I went into this deluxe omnibus edition almost blind. I read only the excerpt in Arcanum Unbounded. Based on the ratings I didn't have large expectations but I was looking forward to finally read it. After a year of waiting full of printing issues that this book had to go through I finally had it in my hands. Props to Dynamite for being so open about it and delivering top quality product in the end.

But once I started reading my disappointment started growing. The dialogues were bad. There was no characterization. Conversations continued “seemlessly” through time skips of days at least twice in the first volume. Didn't notice this later. I'm not talking about transitions but direct dialogues between characters.

Khriss was insufferable though her character improved towards the end. Instead Ais replaced her as one of the worst characters I've ever seen. I hated her inner dialogue. It was so cringe. It reminded me of Warbreaker which I used to consider by far the worst Cosmere novel. Well, now it has a companion.

I don't know if it was poor translation of a written novel into comics media or if the novel itself is this bad. But it simply didn't work. Whole story should've been reworked and properly adapted. I have a feeling they just took dialogues from the book and pasted them into text bubbles with little care for storytelling. Which suggests the book is bad too. There are deus ex machinas, it's simplistic, full of clichés and pseudo twists which you can easily guess.

When I first heard there will be omnibus of this series I couldn't wait and held off on purchasing the separate volumes. This book allegedly contains many improvements. Kriss's notes were cool and added explanations of how magic in this world works. I know that the prologue is also exclusive to this edition. But if anything else was improved I can't imagine the original. They should've spent the resources on redrawing the last chapter of volume 2 which is atrocious. Don't know the reason why it was done by different artist but the other two artists managed to capture the atmosphere quite well. This chapter was full of clinically clean low budget looking drawings which are also sadly present in many other comic books nowadays. No wonder everyone (including me) prefers manga.

There's a sequel teased at the end which I will certainly not touch if it ever comes out. I'm satisfied in getting through this book as I want to read everything in Cosmere but boy... Haven't been disappointed like this in a while. I recommend it only to the hardcore fans.