Corinthya

The details matter.

• The world is fine, the typical alphas are best and omega are next and betas are just there. Nothing groundbreaking just typical.
• When it comes to the characters, some were really good and others just a little flat to me.
• Any of this was broken for me by the writing, the language was good and had some good points, but the big issue was the details.

1. Time was everywhere and very little of it made sense, "they arrived at 12h and 3 hours later it was 4:47..."(not an actual quote) and many other instances where it was one day and the next paragraph it was a completely different day or hour. Just confusing.
2. While the time was passing apparently there were things happening that we only heard about later as if we knew this information.
3. These characters where somehow omniscient and knew things that we ourselves only knew because we got multiple POV's. The amount of times the FMC talked about how Jonah was holding a fracturing pack, but when Joan himself only realized it last chapter was weird. And also this same thought was repeated about 4 times in as many chapters.
4. Some little details kept getting rewritten, very beginning one of the guys cooks when he's stressed (also our FMC) and a few chapters later they couldn't cook for their lives. They made their offices in the second floor and a few chapters later it was the third...

This was a bit of a long rant but for a book that had nice language and premise the writing details really took me out of it.