Corinthya
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Not good.
- The writing was fine even if some dialog made me almost dizzy from the jumps in topics, but that was on purpose.
- Conflict was almost non existent, the real issue was mostly just character based.
- Said that it was gaming themed but didn't really involve it enough to matter, could as well have been anything else.
- For me the real issue was the characters. The FMC had her issues and the MMC's helped her, but when they first get together they decide to say nothing of their intentions when the FMC says it's "just casual". After that when honesty finally comes into play the MMC's use guilt, manipulation and just overal ass behavior to get her to think it's all her fault and issue and try to convince her to do what they want.
In conclusion....MMC's could die for all I care.
Not good.
- The writing was fine even if some dialog made me almost dizzy from the jumps in topics, but that was on purpose.
- Conflict was almost non existent, the real issue was mostly just character based.
- Said that it was gaming themed but didn't really involve it enough to matter, could as well have been anything else.
- For me the real issue was the characters. The FMC had her issues and the MMC's helped her, but when they first get together they decide to say nothing of their intentions when the FMC says it's "just casual". After that when honesty finally comes into play the MMC's use guilt, manipulation and just overal ass behavior to get her to think it's all her fault and issue and try to convince her to do what they want.
In conclusion....MMC's could die for all I care.