Feels written AROUND intimate scenes
If i broke it down. 1/8=work drama 1/4 = eating 1/8 = worrying about her weight 1/2 =sexual relationship/intimacy
I swear to the writing gods that this woman wrote all the intimate scenes FIRST then put a storyline in to REVOLVE around the sex... you know... tomake sure there wasn't too much plot to take away from the intimate scenes. Seemed too... unrealistic and quick... a lot of intimate details and no much of other stuff... the the really story was an after thought and the whole thing was just about sex
SPOILERS!!!!
Ok... let me lead off saying it was cute. A little more detail within sex than I appreciate, but that can be overlooked.
What Can't be overlooked is the obvious cop out with the character Juliet. Christma Elle put a lot of effort into making her into a specific type of person. There is no doubt about it. Juliet was money hungry. When Wes wasn't bringing in the fame and money, she walked out no problems into another man's arms. When seeing Wes with someone that is supposed to be friends, she is catty and mean.
To kiss someone the night before marrying another man who was where she DIDN'T think Wes could take her... and even having her own grandmother catty against her THEN, ALL OF THE SUDDEN, she realizes it was all a mistake she can't marry her cash cow? Nope... that is why I gave it 3 stars.
Don't spend all that time on a protagonist and then try to redeem her in the end. You did your best to make us feel the spite and egg Wes on for his revenge. You wanted us to have pity for Teegan... don't back down in the end.
Enjoyed
I enjoyed it. My biggest thing is vulgar and horrible sex scenes with too much detail. This had very long descriptive sex scenes but they weren't horrible. I didn't like the main character though. She didn't have enough depth. She was very one sided.
It also seemed to be a lot of them in their heads. They spent the whole time thinking about everything. Internal dialogue. Not a lot of external growth.
Paul needed more too him. He was a useless antagonist. The she was more of one then Paul was.
Phenomenal
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and would read again. Very engaging and held my attention. No freaking vulgar sex scenes that made no sense nor helped the storyline and was too in depth on every little sexual detail! THANK YOU FOR THAT! It was a great story that progressed nicely and kept you on the edge of your seat. I had some assumption about who the killer was but was pleasantly surprised that I didn't truly know who it was until the last quarter! Well done!