Teresa
Love it
I am still chuckling at it all. I have been enjoying these books so much and am glad for it! I loved every single one of Janet Evanovich's books in the Stephanie Plums Series, but these books give series competition. If you loved Grandma Mazur in the Stephanie Plum books then this will give you a knee slapping running to the bathroom pain in your stomach good time... May want to stay home for them....
So I have a few ughs about this book. 1. He was thinking about the journal before she told him about it. 2. Why did he stab someone before leaving the room? 3. Why was there a note asking for them to be helped if nothing untold was happening? They were just being recorded... So what then? I mean it feels like she chickened out at last minute instead I following through what she was leading up to...
I liked it but
It was okay but it needed something. More depth? Something. I honestly wouldn't mind reading more, but I won't pay more than .99 because to me it wouldn't be worth it. I wasn't so involved with this one that I am desperate to read them all after that cliff hanger. I may look at pricing, but free is in my budget....
Great concept for a story line
I enjoyed the story, but the descriptions were so in depth that they took away from the story so I would skim them. The plot was excellent, but the timeline was off. She was 26, a teacher for 4 years, and had taught while he was there plus he was held captive for 2 years and went to school to become a teacher... I would suggest she take another look at some grammar errors. Silly things that can be easily missed like hand supposed to be hang and double words. A LOT OF DUPLICATE WORDS. It was worse towards the end like whoever was checking it over got lazy. I didn't take stars off for that, but I admit it got annoying. I only gave it 3 stars because of the timeline issues, some of the story points that were incredibly confusing and the overly descriptive areas. I liked it though...
It had some super hilarious parts in it, but when I read romance novels I am poking for a light enjoyable read. Not to read about God's plan for this and God's plan for that. Nor do I want the constant bible verses either. I wanted to count how many times it said God because it was A TON! It was a heavy hand of religious talk being forced on me.
