Mimi
Unfortunately I don't think Jessa Kane's stories are for me - writing style and length-wise.
I loved the start and tropes in it. I love the idea of a bad boy who instantly becomes obsessed with a shy female lead to the point he'd move her in with him on day 1 and go completely insane that he can't find her, needing her by his side all the time. He hires bodyguards to watch her. He refuses to wear condoms. He'd genuinely rather die that live a life without her, and he really does go through with a suicide attempt.
The writing was just OK and the romance felt too fast and not fully explored. I could understand the romance from the male lead's side and I loved his obsession. But the female lead didn't question how fast it was going at all or freak out. This is supposedly a female lead who grew up in a monastery.
The story lost me completely when the male lead lied to his teammates about how much the female lead meant to him. It's such a predictable future conflict/third act breakup trigger that I just inwardly groaned when I saw it. I understand the book is short but I wish the story built towards something different.
Unfortunately I don't think Jessa Kane's stories are for me - writing style and length-wise.
I loved the start and tropes in it. I love the idea of a bad boy who instantly becomes obsessed with a shy female lead to the point he'd move her in with him on day 1 and go completely insane that he can't find her, needing her by his side all the time. He hires bodyguards to watch her. He refuses to wear condoms. He'd genuinely rather die that live a life without her, and he really does go through with a suicide attempt.
The writing was just OK and the romance felt too fast and not fully explored. I could understand the romance from the male lead's side and I loved his obsession. But the female lead didn't question how fast it was going at all or freak out. This is supposedly a female lead who grew up in a monastery.
The story lost me completely when the male lead lied to his teammates about how much the female lead meant to him. It's such a predictable future conflict/third act breakup trigger that I just inwardly groaned when I saw it. I understand the book is short but I wish the story built towards something different.