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I didn’t like this one overall unfortunately

The writing of this isn’t great. There are some extremely long sentences in this book that don’t make sense and are hard to follow. I also found myself not really caring about any of the characters in this.

The tropes in the first half of the book is what kept me going despite the writing. I do love a dark omegaverse with body betrayal, non con and an alpha that asserts his dominance over his omega. I ended up skimming through the text to follow the plot

The plot wasn’t great otherwise and bored me entirely in the second half. There are constant references to another woman, Moria and we have no context on who she is or what happened to her.

The cliffhanger ending was unnecessary and came out of nowhere. It completely ruined the book for me.

The smut was just OK and not spicy

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This is another book where I should have gave into my instincts to DNF early on but only finished to see whether it would improve and live up to the hype. Unfortunately the urge to DNF continued through the book.

Frustratingly, the foundations of this book is entirely reliant on miscommunication. This book would not even exist if the female and male lead talked to each other. Heck, all problems might have even been solved if they talked to any side character in their lives at all. It was just secret after secret where they kept it to themselves and told no one.

It annoyed me so much I ended up disliking both the leads.

The female lead is physically abused by one of her step brothers and hides this from her friends and her boyfriend, the male lead. The step brother, Chris, ultimately rapes her, gets his friends to rape her, causes her to miscarry and she continues to live at home and tells no one. She allows the male lead to think that she cheated on him.

What is nonsensical about this arc is despite her friends and boyfriend knowing about her bruises and her weirdness about any of them approaching the family home or meeting her family members or their inability to contact her while she’s at home, they don’t suspect someone at home is abusing the female lead.

The male lead even knows about Kyle being her step brother and it never struck him as weird he doesn’t know much about Chris?

2 years later, the leads meet again and there are yet again more opportunities for the female lead to tell the male lead or anyone at all, that Chris is an abuser and a rapist. The male lead is an accomplished hitman, and the female lead’s argument for still keeping this secret is she thinks Chris will kill him. Cue my eyes rolling here.

And the male lead who has an intense network who can find out anything about his targets, which include big bosses and highly protected politicians, can’t find out any information about who Chris is, despite having seen him at the gates himself and access to the female lead’s call log with him. The male lead also supposedly has been watching the female lead at her family home and stalking her enough to kill all her dates. Yet, still has no idea Chris is harming her.

The male lead’s refusal to even consider the possibility that the female lead didn’t cheat on him is also extremely out of character give how upset the female lead would have been in the aftermath and just how in love they were with eachother.

The male lead is being raped and forced to kill people by two villains, Bernadette and Archie, blackmailing the male lead’s family.

The male lead supposedly plans to kill Bernadette and Archie but does nothing for two years, not even a plan in place? He also tells his father, who is himself an accomplished murderer, absolutely everything yet keeps this from him? And conveniently this leads to more angst, plot and the cliche arc of the male lead choosing to leave the female lead for her protection.

The male lead has hired his own security team yet doesn’t have any protecting his own family? He’s rich but doesn’t have lawyers that can fight for his father’s sentence?

He hates Bernadette and Archie but has full trust in them honouring their word and leaving his family unharmed, instead of warning his family and friends that their lives are in danger?

Other plot arcs that made no sense was the male lead’s sister, Luciella, breaking up a relationship between her friend and her brother’s friend because she didn’t want it ruining the friendship dynamics. This is also why the female lead hid her relationship with the male lead.

Towards the end, Archie, a villain, takes a photo of the female lead’s (freaking the male lead out) and orders a hit for her murder.

Firstly, if Archie already had a team tracking the male lead, the team would already have photos of Stacey so the freak out was too late.

Secondly, if Archie really wanted to kill Stacey, the female lead, he could have gotten his team to kill her while they had no idea they were being tracked or even he could have shot her himself because they were oblivious to danger. Instead, Archie made himself known to the leads, walked away leaving them unharmed, sent a team to kill Stacey after essentially warning them he was coming after them, leading to a chase scene where Stacey escapes unharmed.

The book is littered with flashbacks in between, which I felt were unnecessary and disrupted pacing. i didn’t even care about the romance, I needed was the leads to talk to each other.

Unfortunately I was very disappointed by this book and hated it.

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DNF 50%. I do like reading dark smutty romance. Non con taboo relationships aren’t a trigger for me so I didn’t have an issue with this.

However, the writing in this wasn’t great. With this being 95% smut, there wasn’t any chemistry built between any of the characters in this book. Most of the smut wasn’t spicy and actually felt abrupt. There was only a somno scene that I did find spicy.

All the smut scenes fell flat and felt repetitive. At the 50% mark I jumped to the end to see if there was any plot progression, a happy family ending or anything that didn’t feel the same as the first half of the book, to make the rest of the book worth reading.

Unfortunately the ending didn’t redeem the book

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I do like a good reverse gap dark romance from time to time and one where the MMC kidnaps the FMC is an added bonus. But a single mother school teacher with greying hair isn’t the type of FMC I personally enjoy reading about. The writing is decent though. DNF 37%

I’m not a fan of this one unfortunately. I was looking for a spicy omegaverse. There was some smut but I didn’t feel spicy, the names of the leads were a bit weird, I was confused about the world, and the writing didn’t draw me in. I would have DNF if it weren’t short.

DNF 55% I love a spicy second chance divorced couple romance. But this book is very plot-heavy on robots/AI/secret society and I just couldn’t get into it. The smut wasn’t really spicing and I wasn’t connecting with the characters either.

I wasn't a fan of the murder plot unfortunately and the smut didn't feel spicy, but I did like the age gap power dynamics and the breeding kink. The epilogue was the best part of the book. Wouldn't reread

I liked the premise of a dark omegaverse and a naive innocent FMC but the writing style of this book was so hard to follow I had to DNF 58% as I was confused what was happening. The sentences in this book just didn't seem to make sense grammatically.