Elena
270 Reads
The story itself is very good.
But the writing is atrocious. This feels like unedited draft rather than a full fledged book. Too much repetition, too many inconsistencies.
If the book would be edited by a professional - it's easily a 5 star read.
The story itself is very good.
But the writing is atrocious. This feels like unedited draft rather than a full fledged book. Too much repetition, too many inconsistencies.
If the book would be edited by a professional - it's easily a 5 star read.