

The story itself is very good.
But the writing is atrocious. This feels like unedited draft rather than a full fledged book. Too much repetition, too many inconsistencies.
If the book would be edited by a professional - it's easily a 5 star read.
The story itself is very good.
But the writing is atrocious. This feels like unedited draft rather than a full fledged book. Too much repetition, too many inconsistencies.
If the book would be edited by a professional - it's easily a 5 star read.

This was massively over-hyped. Timeline of plot development too unrealistic (in terms of FMC and MMC relationship development), therefore it was not satisfactory and felt too forced.
The ending was not well thought through even considering that you might explain bad execution on character's lack of stability and raising awareness of loosing power, but that would be searching for any reason to explain bad execution of a plot.
This was massively over-hyped. Timeline of plot development too unrealistic (in terms of FMC and MMC relationship development), therefore it was not satisfactory and felt too forced.
The ending was not well thought through even considering that you might explain bad execution on character's lack of stability and raising awareness of loosing power, but that would be searching for any reason to explain bad execution of a plot.