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"Hayden McCarthy is on track to become the youngest partner in her prestigious D.C. law firm. if the case she's just been handed doesn't destroy her first. Hayden McCarthy knows firsthand the pain when justice is not served. It's why she became an attorney and why she's so driven in her career. When she's handed a wrongful death case against the government, she isn't sure if it's the lucky break she needs to secure a partnership--or an attempt to make sure she never gets there. She keeps the case alive through sheer determination and more than a little creativity, but then she's fired by a partner with a vendetta. Further complicating matters, Hayden keeps finding herself completely distracted by Andrew, her roommate's cousin. But his father is a Congressman and she's currently taking on the government. Could the timing be any worse? The longer she keeps the case active, the higher the stakes become. Unknown enemies seem determined to see either the case--or her--die. Should she fight alone for the dead young man by launching her own unfinanced firm, or abandon the case in order to save her own life?"--
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3.5 stars
Well, now, there's an enjoyable legal thriller! I had a very hard time putting this one aside in order to do other things, and it kept gathering steam like a train down a sloped track, so I read all the way to 1 am to finish it! Hayden and Andrew are both really enjoyable characters, and even the legalese is written in a way that is fairly easy to follow. (No simple matter, for those who don't follow federal legal processes to be comfortable reading details of such a case!)
My main gripe is in the details. Many brands are mentioned, and in some cases it helps bring the scene to life. But there were a number of instances where the improper use of details really pulled me out of the story and even had me popping over to Google a couple times to fact-check (something that should have been done by Putman's editor.) Here are some details that jumped out at me:
-Using a Lysol wipe on one's hands is against labeled directions and leaves the hands feeling sticky—not what most artists want to work with.
-Flights from DC to Waco take 4-5 hours, not two, and most flights have a connection in DFW rather than being direct.
-One hour outside Waco is not desert. It's grassland.
-White Castle is not a Texas thing.
-Brake lines being cut don't result in the wheels continuing to turn despite the gas pedal not being depressed.
-Hayden is surprised to see deer on a metro Virginia median? Happens all the time.
-Having the police blame a gunshot to a car on a “hunter missing a shot” in February in the city is a big stretch. Hunting seasons end by January, and it's illegal to hunt within city limits or park limits. Such a shooter would be termed a “poacher” and it would not be dismissed out of hand.
Without all those details being amiss, I probably would have rated it higher because I'd have been all the more absorbed in the story.
Word usage: blonde/blond (both spellings used to describe a woman's hair; not consistent), discrete used for “discreet” (-ete = separate, distinct; -eet = careful, not drawing attention to)
Thanks to NetGalley for a free review copy. A favorable review was not required.
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2 primary books4 released booksHidden Justice is a 4-book series with 2 primary works first released in 2017 with contributions by Cara C. Putman.