Feed Them Silence

It sucks that this wasn't good. Some good ideas but they're squandered so quickly and the emotional drama is so... separate and boring, and the relationship/sex parts were just... they needed to be tied in properly. I think this needed multiple editing passes, but frankly, it was boring, overwrought, preachy, and not scary! A sin for a horror novella. Everyone in this novella was boring and shitty and annoying in unfun ways.