One Night in Beniton Hall

A bit of a miss for me despite the gorgeous cover. It needed another good pass by a skilled editor because the pacing felt wonky and there were misused words, such as how someone “deigned to stay home” which means he was unwilling to but did what he didn't want—and context shows he was doing exactly what he wanted to as head of the house. I felt like I got to know Heather pretty well but Edgar, the hero, is a mystery until right up to the end. The story is a slow pace, which I didn't really mind, but the plot device that created the conflict, her nasty aunt, was one sided and not a complex character.

I'll try another by this author sometime and see if character development and pacing are better!