Princess Princess Ever After

I really wished this was longer because the story feels incredibly choppy, jammed packed with ideas that could be elaborated on, and characters that could use more development. Other wise for this being really short I thought it was fine, I wish they skipped some of the backstory stuff and just made something cute, I would have loved a calm cute story more. Something that really bothers me is they always call the blonde princess fat when in fact she looks about the same size as everyone else...If your going to make her fat do it and she'll still be gorgeous! They just kinda throw it out as an insult to her which I don't really like. ~Ashley